| SeungYoung Yu (200904160) Introduction To English Writing(1) WED 11AM
My life until NOW.
I am a troublemaker.
My name is Seung Young Yu. I was born in 1986, at Seoul.
When I was in elementary school, I had a good relationship with my friends.
When I was in middle school, I was one of troublemakers in my school.
When I was in high school, I was the best of troublemakers. I do remember that i was absent everyday. In that times, i didn't want to go school, but i think of the good old days now.
I am in college and still get a troublemaker. My friend said that you're the best troublemaker in HUFS. This year, I will be tranquil and won't make trouble.
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Sunday, March 11, 2012
SeungYoung Yu / My life until now / WED 11AM
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Hyung-Il kim, wed 11 a.m.
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked about this wrting is it has consistency about the one subject.
Your main point seems to be you were a troble maker until now but now you want to concentrate on study.
I like the word troble maker because it's familiar word for the song. Also I like the word tranquil because I think this word is fresh.
But the part that describe your troblemaker story was not clear for me because it's too general. And I think it could be more intersting story if it's more specific.
I think if you had wrote some anecdote, this would have been a better story.
I want to write more specific, but it is difficult for me to write more specific, because of lack of English proficiency.. :(
DeleteI want to be higher my english skill!!! :)
My life until NOW.
ReplyDeleteI was a troublemaker.
My name is Seung Young Yu. I was born in 1986, at Seoul.
I grew up in Anyang. I have lived in Anyang since 1998.
When I was in elementary school, I had a good relationship with my friends.
Even after I moved other city, I have maintained a good relationship with friends in elementary school. Also, my grade was so good.
When I was in middle school, I was one of troublemakers in my school.
Though I wasn't a great troublemaker, I think i had made trouble.
I don't know why, but when i think back now, fighting with students from other schools might have be problems.
When I was in high school, I was the best of troublemakers. I do remember that i was absent everyday.
In that times, i didn't want to go school. I wanted to quit school and went bad behavior intentionally. Without having to go to school every day, I smoke and have a lot of bad behavior.
Then in 3rd grade of high school, I thought I had to study in order to go UNIVERSITY.
I am in college and still get a troublemaker. My friend said that you're the best troublemaker in HUFS.
This year, I will be tranquil and won't make trouble.
I hope i will study hard, and i will get good grade.