| Thirties, the Best Age to Get Married
People say that age thirty is also called Irip. It means that in that age you are ready to lay the foundation in the society and in your family. And I agree with that too. When you are in your twenties, you are a grown-up taking your first step toward the society. You are just a beginner in your college or at your work. You are very busy working just to take care yourself, and you are not yet ready to afford other people. But when you are in your thirties, you have experienced a lot and you become serious and more rational because you have failed few times in your past. And you know now what is better for you and do not longer do anything irresponsible. Also people over thirties normally have solid jobs that they are now used to, and are responsible for themselves and for other people than people who are younger. It means that you are ready and stable, and it is time for you to make your own family. These are the minimum conditions that people have to have before they get married to someone. And I think age thirty is the best age for marriage. |
Monday, May 28, 2012
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Your writing had strong reasons and supporting details. I especially liked the supporting details which are very persuasive. If I could make a suggestion, it would have been better if you had another different reason. Your two reasons overlap a little bit, talking about being prepared for marriage. If you presented another aspect, it would have made your writing stronger.
ReplyDeleteI really agree with the opinion above. I like your introduction because it says the general opinion of people and it matches with your idea too. But I think your supporting sentences are little bit abstract and only mention that the age thirty is well prepared for marrige. I mean you only talked about "before marriage" things. It would be better to mention "after marriage" things. For example, if you marry after thirties, you will have hard time to take care your children and so on.
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