Tuesday, May 29, 2012

SeungYoung Yu / The best city to live in / WED 11AM

The best city to live in, Gwacheon

 

  I think the best city to live in is Gwacheon. Gwacheon has many advantages. Annually, the city of Gwacheon which is my hometown is chosen the 1st best city in Korea although this city is not familiar as Seoul for foreigners. My hometown also has a lot of government buildings which including the integrated Government Building and it is a major transportation between Seoul and Gyounggi province. It has a lot of political and economical advantages, and it is called 'the best city in Korea' because Gwacheon has many recreation sites. The first site is The Gwacheon/Seoul Grand Park. The Gwacheon/Seoul Grand Park is an absolutely one of the landmarks in Korea. Second, the Grand Park Zoo built the first zoo in Korea is located next to the Gwacheon/Seoul Grand Park. This zoo was built not in artificial site but in natural site. It has a lot of animal species. This place has attracted many visitors because it holds many festivals. Especially, in spring and autumn, our zoo has become a tourist attraction for family visitors. This place is also taken advantage of trail for citizen of Gwacheon. Lastly, Gwan-ak Mountain which is just 632m is located between Gwacheon city and Seoul. It is used to use for a lot of citizen's mountain trail because this mountain's altitude is not high and low. And this mountain is easy to access in all seasons and traffic situations because its entrance is located between two metro stations. As referred to earlier, many enjoyable places are in my hometown. Specially, because many places for families are located in Gwacheon, many families visit Gwacheon. Absolutely, a great many fantastic cities including Seoul and Busan where I live are in Korea for visiting, but Gwacheon is the best city for me forever.

 

1 comment:

  1. From Miyeon Kim

    I like your essay because flow and your detail information is good. However, I think that you should add some information for the second sentence including these:
    What organization or peole did choose Gwachen the best city?
    And what does that mean "the 1st best city"?

    Also, your essay will be improved when you mention more reasons. Actually, in this paragraph, I cannot find another reason except for many attractive sites.

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