Hyung-Il Kim / the teacher I admire / wed 11a.m.
We meet a lot of teachers in our life. Some teachers are good and some are bad. Just giving many knowledge well to student is not the most necessary condition of good teacher. Good teacher is a person who can change students' vision to right way. Also good teacher is who can be the right model for students. When I was in the middle school, I really liked writing teacher. When I first met him, I thought he looks so keen. He was very eagle-eyed and his hair looks stiff. Also he has angulate facial form so I thought he might be very sharp and strick person. My first impression of him was half-right and half-wrong. He has very keen insight about phenomenons but never strick. On the contrary to this, he made an effort to us think freely. For example, he never said "that's wrong" to our opinion. He accepted our every opinion and think about many point of views. Also he told us "don't blame other's opinions. every opinions have a value to consider of." He taught us well and helped us learn other things too. He taught us about attitude of our life. For example, When I had hard time and be concerned about many problems, I told my worries to him. He listened my stories carefully and gave me the energy to restart my works again. I am glad he was my teacher.
I like the way you describe your teacher. It's very detail.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think the first 5 sentences are not necessary. I would suggest you to remove those sentences.
One more thing, there is the sentence saying "He taught us well and helped us learn other things too..." It seems to be little bit abstract to me. It would be better if you put "Quotations" or "Illustration" to explain that sentence instead of the first 5 sentence I mentioned above.
Good work!
When I was in the middle school, I really liked writing teacher. When I first met him, I thought he looks so keen. He was very eagle-eyed and his hair looks stiff. Also he has angulate facial form so I thought he might be very sharp and strick person. My first impression of him was half-right and half-wrong. He has very keen insight about phenomenons but never strick. On the contrary to this, he made an effort to us think freely. For example, he never said "that's wrong" to our opinion. He accepted our every opinion and think about many point of views. Also he told us "don't blame other's opinions. every opinions have a value to consider of." What he taught was not only just about writing but also about how to live. He taught us about attitude of our life. For example, When I had hard time and be concerned about many problems, I told my worries to him. He listened my stories carefully and gave me the energy to restart my works again. He said "Although you are defeated and fail, they can't make narrow your mind." Still now, when I feel frustrated, I recall his words or mails and get power again from them. I am glad that he was my teacher.
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