How to Choose a Gift for Special Person
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Hyejin Kim
Preparing special gift for your beloved person is very important, because it makes you maintain close relationship with the person and sometimes plays crucial role in repairing the relationship. There are many special anniversaries including birthday, wedding anniversaries, valentine day and Christmas. By giving special gift to your beloved one, you will be able to make the day more memorable and unforgettable in your life. In addition, it will help your special person to think that you are really nice and considerate one. If you want to make your gift unforgettable one, first, consider the characteristics and age of your target. For example, if she or he were non-smoker, giving a fancy lighter would be valueless, even though the lighter is very expensive. Second, wrap the gift from the heart. If you prepared a fantastic and meaningful one, wrap it appropriately. Although your present is not good enough and less expensive one, beautiful wrapping helps to move the heart of your special person and make your gift lovely. Finally, write a card with your own hand. There is nothing special than a sentence with your sincere heart and gratitude. The card makes it possible to express hidden feelings and helps your special one to understand you. All these steps will make your anniversaries more meaningful memory with a lovely gift.
FROM Miyeon Kim
ReplyDeleteI think that you used time order words and imperatives properly. There is one thing I suggest for improvement : it will be good if you mention another example about age in the first step. Although the words, smokers or non-smokers, may include age thing, it does not provide sufficient example.
Preparing special gift for your beloved person is very important, because it makes you maintain close relationship with the person and sometimes plays crucial role in repairing the relationship. There are many special anniversaries including birthday, wedding anniversaries, valentine day and Christmas. By giving special gift to your beloved one, you will be able to make the day more memorable and unforgettable in your life. In addition, it will help your special person to think that you are really nice and considerate one. If you want to make your gift unforgettable one, first, consider the characteristics and age of your target. For example, if she or he were non-smoker, giving a fancy lighter would be valueless, even though the lighter is very expensive. In the same context, it would be better to give the thirties of forties shirts and tie instead of just t-shirts or jeans. Second, wrap the gift from the heart. If you prepared a fantastic and meaningful one, wrap it appropriately. Although your present is not good enough and less expensive one, beautiful wrapping helps to move the heart of your special person and make your gift lovely. Finally, write a card with your own hand. There is nothing special than a sentence with your sincere heart and gratitude. The card makes it possible to express hidden feelings and helps your special one to understand you. All these steps will make your anniversaries more meaningful memory with a lovely gift.
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