Monday, May 7, 2012

Kim Seong Yeol / Process Paragraph / Wed 11a.m.

Don't skip your meal anymore!

 

 When you are alone at home and its time to have a meal but if there isn't any particular thing to eat, what do you usually do? Some of you might eat anything you can find in the first sight, of eat instant food such as ramen or soups, and some may even skip the meal. However, it is really easy to make a delicious and plentiful food with just few ingredients you can easily find near you. I'll give you some tips for making simple and delicious Egg Bibimbap so that nobody has to skip their meals. The basic ingredient is rice, eggs, and soy sauce. You can also add sesame oil, tuna, or vegetables etc. First, make boiled rice, which is not watery or sticky. Hard-boiled rice is tastier than sticky rice after putting other ingredients. Then soft-boil one or two eggs and put it on top of the boiled rice. It is important to use both hard-boiled rice and soft-boiled eggs because it is the best combination to make this meal delicious. Finally, season it with the soy sauce and put other ingredients you like and mix it. You will absolutely be able to enjoy the harmony of all the ingredients of Egg Bibimbap. Try it, and you will not anymore have to eat instant food or skip your meal.

2 comments:

  1. It seems that this food is very easy to make. I have to try it for myself someday.
    Anyway, this paragraph has time order words such as first, then and finally so it was easy to follow. However, instead of only mentioning the basic ingredients, it would be better if you explain more about this food when sesame oil, tuna or vegetables are added.
    Good work!

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  2. As I live alone now, your writing is particularly interesting and helpful. I really like the introduction of this writing. You ask something, catch the attention of a reader, and make me think about the issue. The connection between background information and the process tips is very good, I think. But I would suggest that you add more information about the exact amount of ingredients such as boiled rice and eggs. It would make your writing more complete and helpful for readers.

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