How to Make a Cute Small Cake
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Hyejin Kim
As I have made a cake for many times, I'll introduce how to make small, heart-shaped cake. It is very useful and simple way to make a delicious cake for your special day, because most of ingredients are easily found around us. Before starting, you should purchase oval-shaped custard bread which is always seen at bakery chain stores, whipped cream, and jam. In order to decorate the cake, you also prepare some fruits, cookies, chocolates and so on. First, you cut the custard bread horizontally and spread jam and whipped cream on one side of them. Then you put another slice on it. Next, you cut the bread obliquely and turn one piece inside out to make a heart shape. You cover all the surfaces with the whipped cream. Please try to spread it equally and look like a beautiful, clear heart shape. Finally, you decorate it with prepared sliced fruits like kiwi, orange, and strawberry, delicious cookies and chocolates. You are able to add other ingredients and decorate it as you wish. Also, some special messages for your beloved person are written with melted chocolate. I hope this simple recipe will be helpful to celebrate your memorable anniversary.
I have a mistake. I revise all "custard" to "castella". Sorry!! :)
ReplyDeleteYour topic sentence is very clear. And you used time order words properly so I could see how it goes. If I make a suggestion for improvement, you can add tools you use. For example, you can explain the process more clearly by mentioning tools such as bread knife for whipped cream, and a pair of tongs for fruits.
ReplyDeleteYour writing is very specific like reading a cookery book, so it's easy to read and seems to be easy to follow. I would like to try it! One thing I could suggest is that if you had writen a bit about the taste of the cake, it would take more attention of the readers and make them look forward to making it. Anyway, I really want to taste this cake! :)
ReplyDeleteAs I have made a cake for many times, I’ll introduce how to make small, heart-shaped cake. It is very useful and simple way to make a fresh and soft cake for your special day, because most of ingredients are easily found around us. Before starting, you should purchase oval-shaped custard bread which is always seen at bakery chain stores, whipped cream, and jam. In order to decorate the cake, you also prepare some fruits, cookies, chocolates and so on. First, you cut the custard bread horizontally and spread jam and whipped cream with small knife or spoon on one side of them. Then you put another slice on it. Next, you cut the bread obliquely and turn one piece inside out to make a heart shape. You cover all the surfaces with the whipped cream. Please try to spread it equally and look like a beautiful, clear heart shape. Finally, you decorate it with prepared sliced fruits like kiwi, orange, and strawberry, delicious cookies and chocolates. You are able to add other ingredients and decorate it as you wish. A taste of this cake depends on the decoration ingredients you use. If you want a very sweet one, decorate it a lot of chocolates and cookies. But if you want some common cake that everyone enjoys, it is advisable to add variety of fruits. Also, some special messages for your beloved person are written with melted chocolate. I hope this simple recipe will be helpful to celebrate your memorable anniversary.
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