Dynamic Busan
Busan is one of the best cities to live in. It is a historical port city. In the 1960s, Busan was the temporary capital of Korea and it is now called "No. 2 City in Korea". Most people are attracted to this city because it provides citizens with conveniences and constantly changing attractions. Even though Busan is such a big city, prices are relatively low. There are affordable housing, inexpensive restaurants and many traditional markets where it is customary to bargain. And people use public transportation at a reasonable price. Another benefit of Busan is that people can enjoy the sea all the time. Since Busan has many famous beaches, for example, Haeundae, Gwangalli, Songjeong and so on, it takes only 30 minutes at the most to reach and see the sea regardless of the place where people stand. Taking advantage of its location near the shorelines, there are many things related to the sea: an international port in Nampodong, the Jagalchi market with a variety of fresh fish, and a huge aquarium near Haeundae. After I graduate from HUFS and also complete my studies in Germany, I will definitely live in Busan. Certainly I am not sick and tired of this city thanks to its comfortable environment and the interesting nature.
I really agree with you because I've been to Busan last summer and it was fantastic. Your writing is easy to read and reason is well suggested. However, it would be more lively if you add some description - for example, How beatiful the see is, how active atmosphere Busan has-
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that prices in Busan are relatively low. I have been to Busan once and it was really good. I still remember the amazing view of Gwangalli Bridge.
ReplyDeleteYou clearly show your topic in the first sentence.
It would be better if you explain about conveniences and changing attractions by giving some examples.