About Myself
Lazy boy... but at the same time, most diligent boy in the world!!
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HyunCheol CHO
I'm lazy person. I hate doing something that I don't want to do. When I have task that must do but don't love to do, I always put off the task till it's deadline. Although the work is very easy to do and can be finished fast, I always put the work back. That's why I do this assignment at this time of night in spite of a mount of books that I have to read for tomorrow's midterm exam. I'm getting off the subject here, I think it is punishment for my laziness.
But, like the subtitle, I can be most diligent and active boy in the world. Because when I think that something is very important task and necessary thing, I go through fire and water in order to complete the task. For example, When I was high school student, my teacher gave me a hard assignment. This assignment was so difficult that it took at least 2~3 days to complete this task for an average person. At first, I didn't know this assignment comprised 50% of midterm exam score. So I didn't do that task until one day before deadline. And when I realized that this assignment was important for my grade, I didn't sleep for 24 or more hours. I think I was mental victory.
I think my laziness is the thing that must be fixed. But I'm proud of my strong will and determination.
What I liked about your writing is that you mentioned your weakness and the same time your strength. I really liked the part “That’s why I’m doing this assignment at this time of night-“. It was really funny and I felt sympathy with it because I had that experience too. But if you change some parts, your writing can be much better. First, the title is too long. Professor Harberg told us to make title short, at most 5 words. And I think your mention about your diligence collides with your mention about your laziness. If you approached with your will not diligence it could be better.
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Lazy boy who have strong willpower
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HyunCheol CHO
I'm lazy person. I hate doing something that I don't want to do. When I have task that must do but don't love to do, I always put off the task till it's deadline. Although the work is very easy to do and can be finished fast, I always put the work back. That's why I do this assignment at this time of night in spite of a mount of books that I have to read for tomorrow's midterm exam. I'm getting off the subject here, I think it is punishment for my laziness.
But, like the subtitle, I can be most active boy in the world because I have strong willpower. When I think that something is very important task and necessary thing, I go through fire and water in order to complete the task. For example, When I was high school student, my teacher gave me a hard assignment. This assignment was so difficult that it took at least 2~3 days to complete this task for an average person. At first, I didn't know this assignment comprised 50% of midterm exam score. So I didn't do that task until one day before deadline. And when I realized that this assignment was important for my grade, I didn't sleep for 24 or more hours. I think I was mental victory.
I think my laziness is the thing that must be fixed. But I'm proud of my strong willpower and determination. So, from now on, I'll be up all night studying hard for midterm exam.