Hyung-Il Kim / About myself / Wed 11 a m
About myself-lazy but consistent
Since when I was young, I tend to be lazy. Usually I sleeps long time so my parents frequently says me to 'go bed early and get up early'. I had some difficulties because of my laziness when I was in the high school. My high school was far from my house so I should get up at before 6a.m. and had little time for washing and eating. I went to school by the school bus but when I was little late, the bus had gone and I have to take the subway. It was very tired because of the rush-hour time. There was so many people in the subway so I was pressured and felt uncomfortable. After I entered the university, this laziness didn't change so I tried to avoid morning classes. But since this semester, I try to change my laziness and chose several morning classes. And although I tend to be lazy, I finish what I have to do in time. I sometimes postpone what I have to do so there are many things to do on last few days, I more concentrate on the things, hard work and finish the work. Also I don't give up the things I started. Although that becomes tiresome or hard, I endure and make the result from it.
I have a similar plan with you- keeping regular hours. But it is quite hard because I started just two weeks ago. I want you to stick to your plan and make it.
ReplyDeleteHowever, there is a sentence I don't understand. It is:
Usually I sleeps long time so my parents frequently says me to 'go bed early and get up early'.
Does it mean that you were not a morning person or just you slept and got up late?
Your writing focused on a certain aspect of yourself that you tried to improve on, which I liked. I could easily relate to your writing as I went through similar problems. However, I think you could improve this writing by showing more of your color. You should try to show the characteristic that makes you different and interesting to catch the reader's attention.
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