My uncle
My uncle is a math teacher in high school. The fact was quite useful when I was in high school. I found it hard in math during the time. He was willing to help me with that, and he came to my house to teach me 3 times a week on vacations, driving an hour every time. The tutoring was good enough to raise my scores in math. He gave me a substantial help. In addition, with the tutoring, he and I could build up kind of personal intimacy. He really involved me in maternal family. We gathered some people there, to have meetings besides holidays. Going skiing 3 years ago left unforgettable memories to us. On last vacation I spent in Busan, I used to go his home to tutor his son, which is my cousin. It reminds me of the past I learned from him. It's pleased that we interact continuously.
I can feel the love of your uncle in your writing and it reminds me about my beloved uncle too. could feel the love your grandmther has for you just by reading your writing. I like the flow of your sentences and the content. However, it would have been better if you stated the topic sentence obviously because there's no topic sentence, I think. Also, I cannot catch the exact meaning of the sentence that "He really involved me in maternal family.".
ReplyDelete(Sorry for my mistake) I can feel the love of your uncle in your writing and it reminds me about my beloved uncle too.However, it would have been better if you stated the topic sentence obviously because there's no topic sentence, I think. Also, I cannot catch the exact meaning of the sentence that "He really involved me in maternal family.". Anyway you did a good job!
DeleteI was really surprised because I don’t have the uncle like yours. So I really envy you. And the last fact, you teach his son for continous relation is very interesting. But there is a sentence that hard to understand. In the middle of paragraph, “We gathered some people there~holidays”. I can’t understand what you want to write. and it is written about only information of your uncle. i know that your uncle is very good man, but if there is conclusion likes, that's why i like my uncle, it will be better.
ReplyDeleteI love my uncle because we interact and share things continuously. My uncle is a math teacher in high school. The fact was quite useful when I was in high school. I found it hard in math during the time. He was willing to help me with that, and he came to my house to teach me 3 times a week on vacations, driving an hour every time. The tutoring was good enough to raise my scores in math. He gave me a substantial help. In addition, with the tutoring, he and I could build up kind of personal intimacy. He really involved me in maternal family. We gathered some people in my maternal side of family, to have meetings besides holidays. Going skiing 3 years ago left unforgettable memories to us. On last vacation I spent in Busan, I used to go his home to tutor his son, which is my cousin. It reminds me of the past I learned from him. It's pleased that we interact continuously.
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